IMPROVING
STUDENTS� WRITING SKILL OF DESCRIPTIVE TEXT BY USING PICTURE OF THE STUDENTS
XI-AKL AT SMK JAGAKARSA JAKARTA IN THE ACADEMIC YEAR OF 2022/2023
Puri Mastiara1,
Lili Wahdini2, Deny Gunawan Susandi3
Universitas Tama Jagakarsa
Jakarta, Indonesia
|
Keywords |
Abstract |
|
Writing; Descriptive Text; Picture. |
This research aims to
improve students' descriptive text-writing skills by using pictures. The
subjects of this research are the students of SMK Jagakarsa, Jakarta,
academic year 2022/2023, which consist of 21 students in the XI-AKL grade (7
boys and 14 girls). This research was conducted by using classroom action
research. The method that is used in this research is quantitative. The
researcher used observation, tests, and documentation for the collection of
data instruments. This research was accomplished in two cycles, with every
cycle comprising two tests. In the pre-test on the first cycle, the teacher
gave the questions before treatment; then, in the post-test I, the researcher
gave the treatment based on the descriptive text material. In the post-test
on the second cycle, the researcher gave more treatment and information about
descriptive text writing skills by using pictures as learning media. The
result of this research showed that there was an increase in students'
writing skills in descriptive text. In the first test as a pre-test, the
students got scores≥75, 15 out of 21 students (71,42%). In the second
test, as a cycle I post-test, the students scored scores≥75 were, 9
students out of 21 (42,85%). In the last test, as a post-test of cycle II,
the students scored≥75, 4 out of 21 students (19,04%). The increase
from the cycle I post-test to the cycle II post-test was about 28,57%. The
total increase of the student's scores from the pre-test to the post-test of
cycle II (two) was 54,38%. In other words, the student's writing skills in
descriptive text using pictures improved and went well from the first to the
next. |
Corresponding Author: Puri Mastiara
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INTRODUCTION
English
is one of many languages that is used in the world. According to Parupalli,
being the first world language, English is considered to be the first global
lingua franca (Purwanti,
2022). It is also the most commonly used language worldwide for
printing newspapers and other books and for international trade, diplomacy,
mass entertainment, international telecommunications, and scientific
publication. Especially in Indonesia, English is a foreign language that most
Indonesians feel is difficult to learn, especially for students (Tanjung,
2018). To master it, Sadiku, the writer of "The Importance
of Four Skills: Reading, Speaking, Writing, Listening in a Lesson Hour,"
states that four skills need to be learned to be successful: listening,
speaking, reading, and writing. As one of the mentioned skills, writing is
postulated to be essential for English learners (Farrell
& Jacobs, 2020).
According
to the rule, education involves increasing students' knowledge, talents, and
morals (Alt &
Raichel, 2018). Therefore, the students must
significantly master the four English learning skills. They naturally
complement one another and have comparable values among those skills. However,
teaching writing skills necessitates additional from teachers to support
students in their writing activities, partly due to the nature of the writing
process. Writing is an incredible skill that allows one to concentrate and
express signs and symbols in written form. Writing is regarded as the most
challenging skill for EFL students to master, for it has complexities starting
from brainstorming ideas and organizing them into a readable text (Rao,
2017).
Students
at senior or vocational high schools are required to learn a variety of texts,
including procedural texts, report texts, narrative texts, recount texts, and
descriptive texts (Apsari,
2017). One of the English study tools that first-second graders
in senior or vocational high school must master is descriptive text. A written
English text that describes an object is called a description. The thing could
be either concrete or abstract. It could be a person, an animal, a tree, a
house, or even someone camping. It may cover any subject. In the Indonesian
curriculum, teaching to write descriptive text is one of the fundamental
materials to be taught. Descriptive text is a text that describes the features
of someone, something, or a particular place. The descriptive text consists of
an introduction and description. The introduction is a paragraph that
introduces the character. At the same time, a description is a paragraph that
describes the character. The students can use simple present and adjective
clauses in writing descriptive text (Jayanti,
2019).
Based
on the preliminary research conducted by researchers at SMK Jagakarsa,
researchers found the following problems: the students needed to be more active
in writing a text, thus causing typos in their writing, and the techniques and
methods of learning were monotone for the students. The researcher will
research writing, using the writing skills of descriptive text, by using the
pictures at SMK Jagakarsa.
The
research project wants to utilize a method that involves using pictures when
teaching students in senior or vocational high school how to write descriptive
texts. One visual medium to convey some written information is the picture. It
may be utilized more successfully to teach and practice language skills, foster
motivation, and create favorable attitudes toward English (Wichadee,
2017). The strategy could help students in their writing and make
the subject material simpler to comprehend. With the help of this technique,
students can build their writing from the ground up using vocabulary and
adjectives. This technique can be applied to writing ability. Additionally,
this tactic can be applied to individuals, small groups, and classrooms to
pique students' interest in language. The picture model technique, in
particular, is an inquiry-based language art strategy that uses pictures of
typical things and actions to help students derive words from what they have
heard and said (Walker,
2023).
The
problems discussed in the previous text regarding English language learning,
especially writing skills, have potential consequences for student learning
outcomes (Alhusban,
2016). Given the challenges students in Indonesia face in
mastering English, particularly writing, there is a risk that they may struggle
to develop a comprehensive set of language skills (Zein et
al., 2020). Difficulties in learning English, as highlighted by
Tanjung (2018), especially impact students. These difficulties, when coupled
with problems such as monotonous teaching methods and lack of student
engagement, can lead to a decline in writing proficiency, potentially resulting
in typos and a decline in overall writing quality, as identified in preliminary
research at Jagakarsa Vocational School.
The
consequences of this problem extend to broader educational goals, which involve
increasing students' knowledge, talents and morals. If students face challenges
in mastering basic English learning skills, including writing, this can hinder
their overall educational development (Fareed et
al., 2016). In the context of English as a foreign language (EFL),
where writing is considered a challenging skill the difficulties highlighted in
preliminary research, such as students having to be more active in writing and
facing monotonous learning methods, may hinder their progress.
In
addition, the aim of the research project to introduce the method of using
pictures to teach descriptive texts is essential in mitigating these
consequences. has the potential to improve students' writing skills by making
learning material more accessible, fostering motivation, and creating a
positive attitude towards English. This method has the potential to actively
engage students in the writing process, reduce typos, and overcome monotony in
teaching methods, ultimately improving language proficiency and overall student
learning outcomes. Therefore, by addressing these issues and implementing
innovative teaching approaches, this research project aims to have a positive
impact on students' English learning experiences and outcomes (Bowman,
2016).
This
research aims to improve the writing skills of high school and vocational
school students, especially in the context of descriptive texts. By utilizing
learning methods that involve the use of pictures or photos, this research aims
to increase student activity in writing, overcome student difficulties in
writing, and stimulate student creativity. In addition, the objectives of this
research include increasing students' understanding of descriptive text
material as well as supporting inquiry-based learning. Evaluation of the
effectiveness of using images in teaching writing is also a focus to provide
guidance for the development of learning methods in the future. Thus, it is
hoped that this research can provide a valuable contribution in overcoming the
challenges of learning English, especially in the aspect of writing skills.
RESEARCH METHODS
This
research employs a qualitative method, specifically the Classroom Action
Research (CAR) method, utilizing Kurt Lewin's design to elucidate the
enhancement of students' writing skills in descriptive text. The study was
conducted among class II AKL students at Jagakarsa Vocational School during the
2022/2023 academic year. The CAR process encompasses four stages: planning,
action, observation, and reflection, forming an iterative cycle to effectively
address emerging challenges. The data was collected from pre-test and post-test
using the formula in chapter three. Various data collection instruments,
including observation, tests, and documentation, were employed. Data was
gathered from pre-test, post-test I, and post-test II, while the analytical
scoring rubric assessed five key elements: content, structure, vocabulary,
language use, and mechanisms. This approach successfully increased students'
motivation and improved learning outcomes in writing descriptive texts by
integrating teaching aids as an effective instructional medium.
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RESULTS AND DISCUSSION
The picture affects how well students can write descriptive texts. Using
pictures as a medium to help students develop their writing skills,
the method is successful. Writing can be evaluated on five factors: fluency,
content, convention, syntax, and vocabulary. Writing samples should be assessed
across various purposes for writing to give a complete picture of a student's
writing performance across different text structures and genres. By using pictures, students can write descriptive text. If this
condition is compared with the previous one, where the students only use their
imagination to write a descriptive text, using pictures can be identified as a
method that is easier to apply to students (Kurniati, 2019). The researcher can see the enhancement in students'
skill in writing descriptive text, and they were more interested, enjoying the class, and were confident
enough to write descriptive text using pictures (MUTIARA, 2023).
1.
Pre-test
In the pre-test, the students' researcher also put low results from the pre-test because. The student's lack of comprehension of the subject matter
and reluctance to approach the teacher or researcher for clarification led to
the outcome. According to the table, only three students achieved a passing
grade of 75 on the pre-test.
Table
1 Pre-test
|
No. |
Student's Initial |
Pre-test (Cycle I) |
|
|
Score |
Criteria |
||
|
1. |
AP |
62 |
Not Passed |
|
2. |
AM |
70 |
Not Passed |
|
3. |
B |
64 |
Not Passed |
|
4. |
DH |
75 |
Passed |
|
5. |
FNH |
60 |
Not Passed |
|
6. |
JEP |
72 |
Not Passed |
|
7. |
KRA |
75 |
Passed |
|
8. |
MFM |
70 |
Not Passed |
|
9. |
MSR |
64 |
Not Passed |
|
10. |
NCPA |
68 |
Not Passed |
|
11. |
NRA |
75 |
Passed |
|
12. |
NPS |
70 |
Not Passed |
|
13. |
NT |
65 |
Not Passed |
|
14. |
NA |
75 |
Passed |
|
15. |
OR |
70 |
Not Passed |
|
16. |
RA |
60 |
Not Passed |
|
17. |
SS |
73 |
Not Passed |
|
18. |
SAN |
70 |
Not Passed |
|
19. |
SNZ |
68 |
Not Passed |
|
20. |
QTY |
75 |
Passed |
|
21. |
ZI |
75 |
Passed |
|
Total ∑�������� ������= |
1456 |
||
|
The Mean Score = |
69.33 |
||
The mean of the student's scores and the students' categories are still at the
lower level, and the number of the students who were competent in writing
descriptive text is calculated by applying the following formula:
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X:�� The mean of
students
:� The total score
N:�� The number of
students
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students was:
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X���� =� 69,33
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The prior analysis shows that the mean of students' scores is 69,33 from a
total of 21 students; it was obtained that 6 students succeeded in passing the
KKM. At the same time, the students who failed were about 15.
Table
2
Total of Students
|
Code |
Total of Students |
Criteria |
Percentage |
|
P1 |
6 |
Passed |
28,58 % |
|
P2 |
15 |
Not Passed |
71,42 % |
The descriptive text writing skills of the low-level student are displayed
in the table above. The number of students who could write descriptive texts
well, the mean of students' scores, the categories of students who were still
at the lower level, and the mean of students' scores were all calculated using
the formula below:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� :�� The percentage of students that receive the
points (75)
R���� :�� The proportion of students that correctly
answer (75)
T���� :�� The whole student population that takes the
test
Consequently, the
percentage of the students was:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� =�
�100%
P1��� =� 28,58 %
P2�� :�� The proportion of students who comprehend the
material (75)
R���� :�� The percentage of students that receive low
grades (75)
T���� :�� The whole students population that takes the
test
Consequently, the
percentage of the students was:
P2�� =�
�
�100%
P2�� =�
�100%
P2�� =� 71,42 %
2.
Post-test I
In the post-test I (first cycle),� the
student�s score had been increased.
Before
doing this test, students'
performance increased due to their response: to pay greater attention to the
teacher and researcher and ask questions about the material they did not
understand. The chart indicated that some students achieved a passing grade of
75 on the post-test I.
Table
3
Student's Initial
|
No. |
Student's Initial |
Post-test (Cycle I) |
|
|
Score |
Criteria |
||
|
1. |
AP |
68 |
Not Passed |
|
2. |
AM |
74 |
Not Passed |
|
3. |
B |
69 |
Not Passed |
|
4. |
DH |
77 |
Passed |
|
5. |
FNH |
67 |
Not Passed |
|
6. |
JEP |
80 |
Passed |
|
7. |
KRA |
80 |
Passed |
|
8. |
MFM |
74 |
Not Passed |
|
9. |
MSR |
68 |
Not Passed |
|
10. |
NCPA |
75 |
Passed |
|
11. |
NRA |
79 |
Passed |
|
12. |
NPS |
76 |
Passed |
|
13. |
NT |
72 |
Not Passed |
|
14. |
NA |
81 |
Not Passed |
|
15. |
OR |
75 |
Not Passed |
|
16. |
RA |
62 |
Not Passed |
|
17. |
SS |
78 |
Passed |
|
18. |
SAN |
74 |
Not Passed |
|
19. |
SNZ |
76 |
Passed |
|
20. |
QTY |
79 |
Passed |
|
21. |
ZI |
78 |
Not Passed |
|
Total ∑�������������� = |
1562 |
||
|
The Mean Score = |
74.38 |
||
According
to the post-test table for cycle I, 21 students finished writing descriptive
text from the pre-test. The total number of students had a score of 1562. The researcher used the
following to determine the mean of students' scores in the post-test cycle I:
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�� :�� The overall result
N��� :�� The number of students
Therefore, the
average of students was:
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X���� =� 74.38
From the analysis above, it can be understood that students writing descriptive text increased. The mean of students' scores is 74.38 from 21 students. It was obtained that 12 students
succeeded in passing the KKM. Meanwhile, the students who unsucceeded were
about 9.
Table 4 Total of Students
|
Code |
Total of Students |
Criteria |
Percentage |
|
P1 |
12 |
Passed |
57,15 % |
|
P2 |
9 |
Not Passed |
42,85 % |
The following formula was used to determine how many students were
competent in writing descriptive texts:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� :�� The percentage of students that receive
points (75)
R���� :�� The proportion of students that correctly
answer (75)
T���� :�� The whole student population that takes the
test
Consequently, the
percentage of the students was:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� =�
�100%
P1��� =� 57,15 %
P2�� =�
�
�100%
P2�� :�� The proportion of students who comprehend the
material (75)
R���� :�� The percentage of students that receive low
grades (75)
T���� :�� The whole students population that takes the
test
Consequently, the
proportion of the students was:
P2�� =�
�
�100%
P2�� =�
�100%
P2�� =� 42,85 %
From the analysis above, the student's skill in writing descriptive text
has increased. The student's average was 74,38.
Twelve students, or 57,15% of the
class, received a score of 75 or above, and nine students, or 42.85%, received a score below 75. The
ability of the students to write descriptive text improved from the pre-test to
the post-test in cycle I, according to research. However, every student's score
on the cycle I post-test was classified as Not Passed. The researcher desired
the proportion of students who completed the passing grade to be 75% by the
school KKM because the percentage of students passing the grade was only 57,15%. Consequently, cycle II�s
following action was continued.
3.
Post-Test II
Table 5 Post-Test II
|
No. |
Student's Initial |
Post-test (Cycle II) |
|
|
Score |
Criteria |
||
|
1. |
AP |
74 |
Not Passed |
|
2. |
AM |
80 |
Passed |
|
3. |
B |
73 |
Not Passed |
|
4. |
DH |
81 |
Passed |
|
5. |
FNH |
75 |
Passed |
|
6. |
JEP |
87 |
Passed |
|
7. |
KRA |
86 |
Passed |
|
8. |
MFM |
80 |
Passed |
|
9. |
MSR |
73 |
Not Passed |
|
10. |
NCPA |
80 |
Passed |
|
11. |
NRA |
88 |
Passed |
|
12. |
NPS |
80 |
Passed |
|
13. |
NT |
84 |
Passed |
|
14. |
NA |
90 |
Passed |
|
15. |
OR |
83 |
Passed |
|
16. |
RA |
72 |
Not Passed |
|
17. |
SS |
84 |
Passed |
|
18. |
SAN |
80 |
Passed |
|
19. |
SNZ |
80 |
Passed |
|
20. |
QTY |
84 |
Passed |
|
21. |
ZI |
82 |
Passed |
|
Total ∑�������������� = |
1696 |
||
|
The Mean Score = |
80.76 |
||
From the cycle II post-test table,
the total student scores were 1696. The number of
students who completed skills in writing the descriptive text was 21 from the
pre-test and post-test in cycle II. The researcher used the following formula
to determine the mean of the students in the post-test using a picture in cycle
II:
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�� :�� The overall result
N��� :�� Amount of students
Therefore, the
average of students was:
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X���� =� 80.76
From the analysis above, the
score of students writing descriptive text
is getting higher
because of the use of pictures. The mean of students' scores is 80.76 from 21 students. It was obtained that 17 students succeeded in passing the
KKM. While the students who unsucceeded about 4 students.
Table 6
|
Code |
Total of Students |
Criteria |
Percentage |
|
P1 |
17 |
Passed |
80,95 % |
|
P2 |
4 |
Not Passed |
19,05 % |
The number of students who were competent in writing descriptive text using
pictures is calculated by applying the following formula:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
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points (75)
R���� :�� The proportion of students that correctly
answer (75)
T���� :�� The whole students that take the test
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percentage of the students was:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� =�
�100%
P1��� =� 80,95 %
P2�� =�
�
�100%
P2�� :�� The proportion of students who comprehend the
material (75)
R���� :�� The percentage of students that receive low
grades (75)
T���� :�� The whole of the student population that
takes the test
Consequently, the
proportion of students was:
P2�� =�
�
�100%
P2�� =�
�100%
P2�� =� 19,05 %
When doing action research on cycle II (two), the student's ability to
write descriptive text using pictures was rated as being on a good level by the
percentage at which the students' scores increased, indicating that they were
making progress, according to the data. They received a higher score after each
cycle.
Table
7
The Students�
scores of Pre-test, Post-test Cycle I�
and Post-test Cycle II
|
No. |
Students Initials |
Pre-Test Score |
Cycle Score I |
Cycle Score II |
|
1. |
AP |
62 |
68 |
74 |
|
2. |
AM |
70 |
74 |
80 |
|
3. |
B |
64 |
69 |
73 |
|
4. |
DH |
75 |
77 |
81 |
|
5. |
FNH |
60 |
67 |
75 |
|
6. |
JEP |
72 |
80 |
87 |
|
7. |
KRA |
75 |
80 |
86 |
|
8. |
MFM |
70 |
74 |
80 |
|
9. |
MSR |
64 |
68 |
73 |
|
10. |
NCPA |
68 |
75 |
80 |
|
11. |
NRA |
75 |
79 |
88 |
|
12. |
NPS |
70 |
76 |
80 |
|
13. |
NT |
65 |
72 |
84 |
|
14. |
NA |
75 |
81 |
90 |
|
15. |
OR |
70 |
75 |
83 |
|
16. |
RA |
60 |
62 |
72 |
|
17. |
SS |
73 |
78 |
84 |
|
18. |
SAN |
70 |
74 |
80 |
|
19. |
SNZ |
68 |
76 |
80 |
|
20. |
QTY |
75 |
79 |
84 |
|
21. |
ZI |
75 |
78 |
82 |
|
Total |
1456 |
1562 |
1696 |
|
|
The Mean Score |
69.33 |
74.38 |
80.76 |
|
The mean of increasing the student's skill in writing descriptive text
could be seen as follows:
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mean of students
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N��� :��� The
number of students
a.
Pre-test
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b.
Post-test I
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c.
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Figure
1 The Mean of
Students� Score
Table 8
The means score of
the Pre-test, Post-test Cycle I, and Post-test Cycle II
|
X |
Pre-test |
Post-test I |
Post-test II |
|
Mean |
69.33 |
74.38 |
80.76 |
The mean of students' scores in the post-test of cycle II was the highest,
so the student's skill in writing descriptive text using pictures improved from
69,33 to 80,76.
By using the formula, the percentage of students who were competent was
determined:
P�� =�
�
�100%
P�� :��� The proportion of students who comprehend
the material ≥75
R� :��� The proportion of students that correctly
answer ≥75
T�� :��� The whole student population that takes the
test
The following percentage represents how much student�s ability to write
descriptive text is improving:
a.
The percentage of
students' competence in the pre-test was:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� =�
�100%
P1��� =� 28,58%
b.
In the post-test
I, the percentage of students who were competent was:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� =�
�100%
P1��� =� 57,15%
c.
In the post-test
II, the percentage of students who were competent was:
P1��� =�
�
�100%
P1��� =�
�100%
P1��� =� 80,95%
The percentage of
students' skills in writing descriptive text
|
Cycle |
The Students' Competent |
Percentage |
||
|
Cycle I |
Pre-test |
6 |
28,58% |
|
|
Post-test I |
12 |
57,15% |
||
|
Cycle II |
Post-test II |
17 |
80,95% |
|
The table above revealed that students' scores increased from the pre-test
to the post-test of cycle I and cycle II. 6 out of 21 students, or 28,58%, who took the first test as a
pre-test received a score of 75 or above. 12 out of 21 students, 57,15%, who took the second test as a
follow-up to the cycle received scores of 75 or higher. 17 out of 21 students,
or 80,95%, who took the final test
as a post-test for cycle II received a score of 75 or lower. There was an
increase of roughly 23,08% from the
cycle I to cycle II post-test.

Figure
2 Students� Score
Percentage
This research was done to help students get better at writing descriptive
text using pictures. A picture was one of many media that teachers could use.
Teachers teach English and improve the students' skills. skillsescriptive text,
a text used in this research, is a kind of text that its masteries can use a
picture with the assistance of an English teacher.
According to the researcher's research, pictures might be used to educate
students on writing descriptive texts or were emotionally engaging. The tables
showing how students' scores increased from the pre-test and post-test of the
cycle I and II could be observed�the growth because the teacher developed a
dynamic class and knew how to manage it. The picture also made it easier for
the children to understand the object. Based on quantitative data, it was
possible to observe that the student's writing skills improved from the first
meeting to the following meeting. Data from observation, testing, and visual
evidence showed that the students were engaged and paying attention to the
lesson the teacher was teaching. When using pictures to complete the work, the
students also get a sense of spirit. As a result, the research's findings
support the idea that using pictures can enhance the ability to write
descriptive texts. This can be seen from the quantitative data, which shows
that students' scores improved on the first post-test for cycle I and on the
post-test for cycle II, respectively.
The result indicated an increase in the student's skill in writing
descriptive text using pictures. The mean of the first test as the post-test in
cycle I was 74,38. It was good enough. According to the data, the mean of the
second test as a post-test in cycle II was 80,76; the second cycle's scores and
mean were higher than the first cycle's.
Additionally, there was a rise in the proportion of students who scored
75,06 out of 21 (28,58%) who took the first test as a pre-test and received a
score of less than 75. The students received a score of 75 on the second test.
Which served as a cycle I post-test from 21 students (57,15%). 17 students out
of 21, or 80,95%, received a score of 75 or above on the final test
administered as a follow-up to cycle II.�
From the post-test of cycle I to the post-test of cycle II, there was an
increase of roughly 28,57%. From the pre-test to the post-test of cycle II, the
student's overall scores increased by 23,08%. In other words, the student's
writing skills for descriptive text increased and strengthened from the first
meeting to the next.
The quantitative data were organized from the observation test (using
pictures) and documentation. These findings showed that students participated
in the teaching-learning process by expressing their attitudes and responses,
even though at the beginning of the lesson, they needed more interest and
clarification about the terms' meanings. Some were shy and afraid to ask
questions about things they did not understand. Some students were caught
cheating, and they caused some disturbances. However, the subsequent meeting
was superior to the previous one since fewer errors existed. Students found
writing descriptive text using pictures to be fascinating and enjoyable,
according to a picture test. Based on documented data, the students appeared
engaged and enthusiastic in the teaching and learning. Based on quantitative
data, the picture could improve students' skills in writing more descriptive
texts at SMK Jagakarsa Jakarta School of XI-AKL.
CONCLUSION
Upon
analyzing the data, several conclusions were drawn. Firstly, it was evident
that using pictures could enhance the writing skills of XI-AKL grade students
at SMK Jagakarsa Jakarta in descriptive text. Secondly, the research findings
indicated a noticeable improvement in students' ability to compose descriptive
texts. The mean score in post-test cycle II surpassed that of cycle I,
demonstrating a positive trend. Moreover, the percentage of students achieving
a score of 75 or higher exhibited a consistent increase across cycles,
affirming the effectiveness of utilizing pictures to foster improved
descriptive writing among students.
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